Tuesday, April 14, 2015

Intriguing

Today I continued to read the Secret Garden.  I like the book because it's at a point where it's hard to stop reading. Just a day ago it was super boring and in just a short time it was so intriguing. So far my favorite part is when Mary hears crying when she's wandering throughout the corridor. One thing that would make the story better would be if the author described the surroundings more and what things looked like. I only say that because it's real boring when they just talk and you don't know where they are or what things look like. Finally, my question is why didn't she go outside in the rain and play and get wet?

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